Crossing-Over :: Page 79 (Ch 3)

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28th Mar 2015, 7:02 PM
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28th Mar 2015, 7:02 PM

Sorry for the slight update delay.

Here's a little explanation. The ray machine mixes genetic properties together but usage on people (anthros) are restricted to certain conditions. Flagre Company developed the super-enhanced formula some time ago but every volunteer died almost instantaneously after infusion since their bodies could not adapt fast enough. It was sold at a bargain price to purchasing firms interested. Code R.T. is a long-term expensive project that did not yield results but Mr. Genus never gave up on it. This situation technically is a failure too, or is it?

28th Mar 2015, 11:04 PM

That... That is a strange combination of projects. So strange that the fact both thingies altered his DNA just can't be a coincidence.

That or they have a terrible way of organizing their projects.

29th Mar 2015, 4:02 AM

Strange projects. Strange odds. Strange occurrences. Fate sure is fanciful.

29th Mar 2015, 8:40 PM

Living vicariously through his son, changing him into his lost sister is hardly fair to the boy who has his own personality and life outlook. Dad needs psychiatric counseling badly.

30th Mar 2015, 9:02 PM

There's a counselor in the same room but she doesn't seem to have a problem with it lol.

31st Mar 2015, 1:09 PM

setting aside the unnatural dialog, the illustrations do not convey the emotional progression put forward in the text.the characters feel hollow because there is no real emotion and barely even expression in anything about the way the are drawn. in addition to that there is a strange detachment in every panel's composition that forces my eye away from the page, this makes it hard to look at long enough to decipher what should be portrayed in relation to the dialog.

the explanation given in recent pages should have been present throughout the backgrounds as fox-raccon-bear guy was breaking into the lab, so the reader would have some idea as to what went on.
if a big reveal was necessary then give the reader small bits of information so we can infer everything other than why he changed sex, with the sister being the reveal.

you have a huge problem with the fathers characterization: what's been presented so far is not consistent with a man who is seriously unhinged over the loss of his daughter.

31st Mar 2015, 6:58 PM

To be fair, he's had over ten years to get over it. And instead of moping around, he was up doing something about it.

31st Mar 2015, 9:06 PM

He has not done the the kind of thing that someone who had come to terms with such a loss and then moved on would do. not by a long shot.

4th Apr 2015, 7:33 PM

Next page will be delayed a day. Next update might be slightly delayed too. Until after next week, I am dealing with some extras issues that require my attention so your patience is appreciated.

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