Crossing-Over :: Page 44 (Ch 2)

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4th Jan 2014, 5:18 AM
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4th Jan 2014, 5:18 AM

First page for the new year! 2014. I have high hopes for this year and my webcomic. It will be one of great things I tell you. I want to reach my goal of the story going full speed before the year ends so buckle up readers for rest of this chapter and the next one coming soon. On that note, Cliff sure is quite the rebel isn't he?

4th Jan 2014, 9:47 AM

This kid needs a serious attitude adjustment. I can hardly wait until he finds out what that goo can do to him.

18th Jan 2014, 10:26 PM

This is very good I've BOOKMARKED and will check again in a few months! Compared to other works this is good, if this is your first work then I'm surprised, you are a competent artist/ writer! Good luck and 'keep calm and make artz'

19th Jan 2014, 7:30 AM

Thank you! I'm actually teaming up with a nice artist to make this for you guys. My goal is to make something good with this mish-mash of genres. All about making stuff fun for the readers!

11th Jun 2014, 2:34 PM

i'm gonna assume this writing is in keeping with orange's character and that character is 'dumb' (i'm reading backwards.)
other than that, standard complaints; "grand copy pasted army of the republic", volume, motion & motion lines. and another thing i might not have mentioned earlier; "and" and "&" in speech - use one or the other, not both.

11th Jun 2014, 5:35 PM

Give the MC a break. He's only 13 years old. Having him be a child prodigy who knows how to beat something before the battle starts often kinda makes things more predictable. About the other issues you see, it's always a work-in-progress for me and my team. I know my webcomic is the best thing since sliced bread; I still appreciate your thoughts.

11th Jun 2014, 3:26 PM

in fact, just don't use "&", it looks sloppy.

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