Crossing-Over :: Page 50 (Ch 2)
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7th Apr 2014, 2:39 AM
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7th Apr 2014, 2:39 AM

That big robot sure packs a punch. If you check my dA page, you'll notice that I've recently picked up a colorist for my webcomic and they'll start working when Chapter 3 happens. Pages will hopefully update faster and color quality will improve. My comic deserves that type of treatment if you ask me lol!

Comments:
7th Apr 2014, 11:13 PM

So far, good reflexes. He is agile.

8th Apr 2014, 4:52 AM

Ah, youth and adrenaline. Good thing Cliff doesn't sit down with video games all day and steps outside often.

11th Jun 2014, 1:36 PM

he needs more motion in his pose in the last panel, in general you need to suggest more action in the poses and use "motion lines" sparingly.

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