Crossing-Over :: Page 49 (Ch 2)
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24th Mar 2014, 4:21 AM
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24th Mar 2014, 4:21 AM

Ho boy, that opponent looks like he'll be a good challenge for our gallant hero. Can Cliff prevail? Don't forget you can support us by leaving a tip in our jar, becoming a patreon or show this webcomic to your friends. Word of mouth is the best marketing force for my humble comic after all!

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Comments:
11th Jun 2014, 1:45 PM

"*gasp*" in the third panel was necessary, his expression get's the point across but if it had to be there, you should not have put it in a bubble and certainly not on the character. the speech bubble in the first panel as well is ill placed as well.

you might want to use construction lines to keep the shape of the fox(?)guy's head consistent.

11th Jun 2014, 1:46 PM

i might want to consider proof reading what i type...

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