Crossing-Over :: Page 39 (Ch 2)
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30th Oct 2013, 1:14 AM
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30th Oct 2013, 1:14 AM

Further experimenting with speed lines and text mashing on my part. Glad to have this page out. As you readers may have noticed, I'm improving my site from a basic look to something more sophisticated.

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11th Jun 2014, 3:06 PM

first panel is actually not bad, his head suggests volume, well done!

speech bubbles are still too close to his head(they shouldn't touch). i chuckled at the last panel, he looks like he's trying to take an uncomfortable shit. there would be great benefit in more indication that the button presser was not Orange himself.

20th Jun 2014, 6:14 PM

heh, he really can't talk! he just decked a tech then ran away and hid!

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